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So exciting! I still felt in warranted more though - possibly even a novel!

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Thanks, Jilly. I delighted you enjoyed Bobby Severn's Flashlight. I felt that way, too: This story is only the beginning. I plan to expand it.

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I relate to Bobby’s desire to be a kid again. Being an adult sucks sometimes. At the same time though, being an adult sometimes allows you to do the things you couldn’t as a child, which is nice.

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Both are good states of being. There's a part of me that very much misses being six again. But I'll continue to enjoy my adult life.

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I really enjoyed this, Bill. Bobby is such a fun character. I saw your comment below about possibly expanding this story, and I think that is a wonderful idea!

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Thanks, Justin. Some of my stories become longer. I've slated Bobby Severn's Flashlight for a novella treatment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Same here, Bill. Awesome! I look forward to reading its longer form someday. 😀

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Well done Bill, another excellent story.

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Thanks, Dan. This was fun one to write and I'm glad you enjoyed Bobby Severn's Flashlight.

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Very enjoyable story - thank you for sharing!

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Thank you, Rose. I'm delighted to hear you enjoyed Bobby Severn's Flashlight.

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That was such a great story! It reminded me a bit of The Day of the Triffids, but even more fantastical 😁

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Thanks, Brian. I'm glad you enjoyed Bobby Severn's Flashlight. I haven't read The Day of the Triffids, but I'm going to.

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I think you'll really enjoy it. I'm pretty sure it's considered one of the first post-apocalyptic sci-fi fiction novels. Because it was published in 1951 it has the feel of those black and white movies with giant radiated ants or spiders.

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Excellent!

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An interesting read - as always! Thanks for sharing. 😀👍

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Thanks, Gail. I had fun writing Bobby Severn's Flashlight. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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