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Aug 9, 2021Liked by Bill Adler

Great story, but no I wouldn't drink it 😂

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I like how the narrator didn’t reveal his own thoughts to the audience. It’s a neat little trick I haven’t seen used often enough. Great story Bill.

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Aug 9, 2021Liked by Bill Adler

I'll take a 6 pack

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Aug 28, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Whoaaa! A great read - this might be the basis for quite an interesting book!

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One could either infer that the narrator also had racist thoughts or that the cola only made people believe they heard others' thoughts and he dumped his first girlfriend for nothing. Also, human minds pour our an enormous amount of conditioned garbage on a daily basis. We don't necessarily believe everything that enters minds. I think the ability to overhear other people's' mind drool would be an unhealthy burden!

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