This is totally brilliant, Bill. I don't know how you feel about writing for children, but this would make a truly fantastic book for children, I can even see a movie coming out of it. Did you have to do much research into the various historical points? Would love to know what inspired you to come up with such an original idea!
I love time travel stories, many have elaborate time machines but this story uses a simplified approach to moving through time which allows us to focus on the results of the travel adventure.
I also like the fact that the traveler is a little girl, you really caught the essence of that character well. Good job. Guess I now have to read your other stuff.
This is totally brilliant, Bill. I don't know how you feel about writing for children, but this would make a truly fantastic book for children, I can even see a movie coming out of it. Did you have to do much research into the various historical points? Would love to know what inspired you to come up with such an original idea!
Love this. So much!
Great tale!
Loved this! Such a fun idea for a story :)
Wow! The beginning made me think of Jumanji! 😂 🤣 What a complex story but well executed!!!
Great story Bill, thanks
A great twist!
Now that was mega complicated!!
Excellent
I love the adventure of time travel! I’m glad the family got together. 😀👍
I love time travel stories, many have elaborate time machines but this story uses a simplified approach to moving through time which allows us to focus on the results of the travel adventure.
I also like the fact that the traveler is a little girl, you really caught the essence of that character well. Good job. Guess I now have to read your other stuff.