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Mar 27, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Very very good! I assumed they weren't people but this twist was very clever, esp the castle!

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Mar 27, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Really enjoyed the change of perspective!

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Jul 24, 2023Liked by Bill Adler

You have the best imagination

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Dec 4, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

I love that I can't predict your endings! Great story!

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At first thus reminded me of a story I wrote decades ago called Where Is Day? But yours finished with a brilliantly comical twist and I loved it!

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Of course, the fish castle! Thank you for the big smile and laugh :-D

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Mar 28, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Brilliant, I love it.

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I thought something was fishy from the start. 😉

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Mar 27, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Just super. Imagining how fish feel!!

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Mar 27, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Really enjoy your stories.I loved the twist at the end very clever

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Mar 27, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Really enjoyed it!!

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Mar 27, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Very good! Their fears based in the reality of aquatic life, a great play on perspective and reality.

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What a story! Thanks for sharing, Bill. I really enjoyed it.

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The more intelligent being isn’t always more perceptive :-)

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This is Bill Adler! This is why we read your stories Bill. Thank you!

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Mar 27, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Omg loved the twist. So cute

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