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Great story with several twists!

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"Something's always breaking!". Yeah, I used to live in a house like that....

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You have a wonderful writing style, Bill.

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Jun 4, 2023Liked by Bill Adler

Oopsies! Fun twist at the end!

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May 27, 2023Liked by Bill Adler

I guess humans aren’t the only ones who lose track of time!

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Oops!

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Fun story, Bill! I enjoyed the twist!

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Nice one, Bill! 😎

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Ha! funny. Nice twist with the eclipse. Anytime I see a vampire roast is a good time. Part of me wasn't sure what you were going to do with the wife... like maybe she knew it was an eclipse and just wanted him gone from her life... FINALLY!

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Brilliant, as usual!

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May 7, 2023Liked by Bill Adler

I wasn’t sure if I should laugh or feel sad…….. I laughed. Great story.

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May 7, 2023Liked by Bill Adler

Oops

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