It’s Finally Safe to Go Outside

[Jim Melvin]

Great story with several twists!

[Bill Adler]

Thanks, Jim. I'm glad you enjoyed It's Finally Safe to Go Outside.

[David Perlmutter]

"Something's always breaking!". Yeah, I used to live in a house like that....

[Bill Adler]

That's the reality I existed in in my very old house, too.

[Shielagh Hochberg]

You have a wonderful writing style, Bill.

[Bill Adler]

Thank you, Shielagh!

[Christina Chew]

Oopsies! Fun twist at the end!

[Bill Adler]

Thanks, Christina. I like twisty stories. I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

[V. C. Ackerman]

I guess humans aren’t the only ones who lose track of time!

[Mark Starlin]

Oops!

[Bill Adler]

Yup!

[Justin Deming]

Fun story, Bill! I enjoyed the twist!

[Bill Adler]

Thank you, Justin. I like twisty stories and I'm glad you do, too.

[Susy Botello]

Nice one, Bill! 😎

[Bill Adler]

Thank you very much, Susy!

[Dan Blakely]

Ha! funny. Nice twist with the eclipse. Anytime I see a vampire roast is a good time. Part of me wasn't sure what you were going to do with the wife... like maybe she knew it was an eclipse and just wanted him gone from her life... FINALLY!

[Bill Adler]

Thanks, Dan. I'm glad you enjoyed this little vampire tale.

I like your twist! After centuries together, I could see her wanting--pardon the pun--new blood in her life.

[Dascha Paylor 🌴🥥]

Brilliant, as usual!

[Bill Adler]

Thank you, Dascha. I had fun with the gothic vibe, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

[Dan]

I wasn’t sure if I should laugh or feel sad…….. I laughed. Great story.

[Bill Adler]

I think laughing works for this story. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Scott Michels]

Oops

[Bill Adler]

Right? Even vampires make mistakes.