What a clever way to tell a story, Bill! It did leave me gasping for breath! I must admit, I'd pobably walk out on a guy like that, too! It makes a subtle point though. We are all becoming far too automated. Carry on like this and we will evolve into human/AI hybrids!
I could imagine being the woman on this date. All my watch does is tell time... And it's time for me to go. Lol. Great job. A whole story in a sentence. Love it.
Very clever, Bill! This man has chosen to give up his autonomy and become a slave. Sounds dystopian, but really not far off the mark for 2023 if you ask me. Scary!
Bill, I love what you did here. Great cadence, the piece rolls along faster and faster to the perfect ending. I like the one-sentence form too, and might try it with a piece or two. Keep up the good writing.
Life by the Numbers
What a clever way to tell a story, Bill! It did leave me gasping for breath! I must admit, I'd pobably walk out on a guy like that, too! It makes a subtle point though. We are all becoming far too automated. Carry on like this and we will evolve into human/AI hybrids!
I could imagine being the woman on this date. All my watch does is tell time... And it's time for me to go. Lol. Great job. A whole story in a sentence. Love it.
I must have bought the wrong brand.
I would up and leave too!
Very clever, Bill! This man has chosen to give up his autonomy and become a slave. Sounds dystopian, but really not far off the mark for 2023 if you ask me. Scary!
Ha! Clever, and beautiful!
Technology is good, but never forget how to think for yourself.
Hahaha! Great twist at the end.
A wonderful story!
Brilliant sentence and story!
Bill, I love what you did here. Great cadence, the piece rolls along faster and faster to the perfect ending. I like the one-sentence form too, and might try it with a piece or two. Keep up the good writing.
I’m glad you used the word ‘salubrious.’
You're such a great author Bill Adler. Another good reality story.
Good job, I was out of breath reading it.
What a great way to start the day. I haven’t had a good morning laugh like this in a while. Well done Bill!
But it couldn't tell the time.