What a clever way to tell a story, Bill! It did leave me gasping for breath! I must admit, I'd pobably walk out on a guy like that, too! It makes a subtle point though. We are all becoming far too automated. Carry on like this and we will evolve into human/AI hybrids!
Very clever, Bill! This man has chosen to give up his autonomy and become a slave. Sounds dystopian, but really not far off the mark for 2023 if you ask me. Scary!
Bill, I love what you did here. Great cadence, the piece rolls along faster and faster to the perfect ending. I like the one-sentence form too, and might try it with a piece or two. Keep up the good writing.
What a clever way to tell a story, Bill! It did leave me gasping for breath! I must admit, I'd pobably walk out on a guy like that, too! It makes a subtle point though. We are all becoming far too automated. Carry on like this and we will evolve into human/AI hybrids!
I must have bought the wrong brand.
I would up and leave too!
Very clever, Bill! This man has chosen to give up his autonomy and become a slave. Sounds dystopian, but really not far off the mark for 2023 if you ask me. Scary!
Lovely! This flowed well, and I really liked the ending.
Ha! Clever, and beautiful!
Technology is good, but never forget how to think for yourself.
Hahaha! Great twist at the end.
A wonderful story!
Brilliant sentence and story!
Bill, I love what you did here. Great cadence, the piece rolls along faster and faster to the perfect ending. I like the one-sentence form too, and might try it with a piece or two. Keep up the good writing.
I’m glad you used the word ‘salubrious.’
You're such a great author Bill Adler. Another good reality story.
Good job, I was out of breath reading it.
What a great way to start the day. I haven’t had a good morning laugh like this in a while. Well done Bill!
But it couldn't tell the time.