Hi Bill! I'd like to feature this story on The Hidden Gems Podcast, which is an ad-free podcast that is dedicated to bringing our listeners a variety of classic and original short stories. Here is the address to our latest short story https://the-hidden-gems-podcast.simplecast.com/episodes/laura-written-by-saki
If you are interested, please let me know. If not, no worries. I enjoy your stories!
Excellent. I thought this story story was heading in the same direction as the Twilight Zone episode, "A Stop at Willoughby" - was not expecting that twist at the end, but I liked it. It makes for a more nuanced perspective of Oppenheimer's contributions to science.
You told his story better in a couple of minutes than Christopher Nolan did in a couple of hours.
Now this is one heck of a story. I love how your mind works, Bill. The time travel element is so much fun and so creatively executed!
Hi Bill! I'd like to feature this story on The Hidden Gems Podcast, which is an ad-free podcast that is dedicated to bringing our listeners a variety of classic and original short stories. Here is the address to our latest short story https://the-hidden-gems-podcast.simplecast.com/episodes/laura-written-by-saki
If you are interested, please let me know. If not, no worries. I enjoy your stories!
I've been looking for writing like this! Glad I found it. Your craft is excellent and the story is compelling. YAY for great writing.
I like how he time travels, thank you!
That was different. Great.
Liked the final twist!
Excellent. I thought this story story was heading in the same direction as the Twilight Zone episode, "A Stop at Willoughby" - was not expecting that twist at the end, but I liked it. It makes for a more nuanced perspective of Oppenheimer's contributions to science.
A little bit of redemption for the bomb builder. Could have been a movie. 😉 (I haven’t seen the newest Oppenheimer movie.)
You have a good grasp of the eternal arc.
We may flame out
Or slowly decay
But our children
And theirs
Will place our shadows
Alongside those
In the great
Sunlit forest