Beautifully written as always Bill. Lots of colourful description. Loved it but couldn't get the connection between the running man and the comet - sorry. Maybe I am not quite awake or something?
I tried to blur the space between reality and fantasy in this story. Is the comet real? Did he fly? I'll leave that up to you to decide. All I can say for sure is that he's hot from exercising and unhappy because he's made to exercise.
Thanks Alison. If you're interested in taking up stair climbing, there's a fun FB group, Stair Climbers International. It's actually an addictive exercise.
Beautifully written as always Bill. Lots of colourful description. Loved it but couldn't get the connection between the running man and the comet - sorry. Maybe I am not quite awake or something?
I tried to blur the space between reality and fantasy in this story. Is the comet real? Did he fly? I'll leave that up to you to decide. All I can say for sure is that he's hot from exercising and unhappy because he's made to exercise.
He escaped by flying into the heavens. A beautiful surreal way to die.
Thank you, Kristofa.
I love your imagination. Great story even from one of those people who does love exercise :-)
Thanks Alison. If you're interested in taking up stair climbing, there's a fun FB group, Stair Climbers International. It's actually an addictive exercise.