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Warning: side effects may include lycanthropy.

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Ahhhooooo! Werewolves of London. Should play some Warren Zevon to this! ;)

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That was a twist I didn't expect.

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Nice one. Great ending!

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Oct 29, 2023Liked by Bill Adler

Definitely didn’t see that one coming. Love it!

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Didn’t see that coming at all, Bill! Excellent twist. What a story - and what a gruesome way to go!

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Surprise ending!

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Brilliantly unfolded. The dialogue is excellent, Bill. The tension was incredible

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"Her breath smelled like graveyard rot"...love it! This felt like a fun commercial for placebo treatments until the twist at the end, though maybe it still would work :)

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Wow. That was a serious temper tantrum. 😬 Never marry a werewolf wannabe, I guess. 🀣

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I was expecting a twist with such an open and shut storyline. After all, meddling someone's meds is pretty universally evil. What I got...bro im just staring at it like 'wtf.' That's not meant as an insult, I just have no idea what that was.

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Oct 29, 2023Liked by Bill Adler

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Oct 29, 2023Β·edited Oct 29, 2023Liked by Bill Adler

Well that was a terrifying twist, bravo!

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Oct 29, 2023Β·edited Oct 30, 2023Liked by Bill Adler

Jeeeze. Hallowe'en is sure bringing out the weird on Substack this week. The ghoulish, the blood-dripping, the morphing, the terror, the slaughter... Bring it on! Get it out, I say!

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Oct 29, 2023Liked by Bill Adler

Oh my!

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Yikes!

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