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Apr 10, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Thank you Bill for another good Sunday morning story.

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I'm new to Substack and it's nice to see fiction pieces like this one. I really enjoyed the suspense here; makes me wonder what drives some folks to risk their lives chasing storms.

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Very interesting story. I think if you can survive that you probably could survive anything.😮👍

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Okay I’ll say it. Jack was banana sandwich loco. 😂

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Powerful, Bill! Thanks for immersing me into the world of this storm chaser. Glad he ended well! (Today, I finally joined Substack.)

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I loved the story, Bill. Your descriptions grounded me in the scene, and I thought the twist at the end was really well done.

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Apr 10, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

I found the story so vivid in your description of the storm .The ending had a great twist.

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Apr 10, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Exciting! I could see it through your description. (Glad I wasn't a part of it.) Thanks for sharing your writing gift once again.

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Apr 10, 2022Liked by Bill Adler

Felt like I was there.

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