Imaginative story. I especially like the exposition. Post post editing is an alluring feature of Substack. Picky notes: Patel, Patol or Patal? I do miss spell-check. I'm unfamiliar with Pooh, so I'm probably missing a lot, however "Kanga tapped her microphone" was a little unclear. Picky, Picky. Love your writing.
Highly entertaining, and again your ending surprised me. I should've known better. You don't seem to repeat ideas. I was thinking this was kids playing with their toys. Well, maybe it was. Grownup kids with some very dangerous toys ... and honey ... lots of honey.
Nice! Ever seen Dogma? Great movie
"two-hudred-fifty-five feet" missing the 'n' in hundred.
Imaginative story. I especially like the exposition. Post post editing is an alluring feature of Substack. Picky notes: Patel, Patol or Patal? I do miss spell-check. I'm unfamiliar with Pooh, so I'm probably missing a lot, however "Kanga tapped her microphone" was a little unclear. Picky, Picky. Love your writing.
That silly old bear and his friends from the hundred acre woods save the day again. What a fun story.
I hate to be a little black rain cloud, but I think Pooh would have said “oh, bother” instead of “oops.”
(I snuck Pooh into a story last week. 🤓)
What an absolute delight, Bill. Loved this!
Highly entertaining, and again your ending surprised me. I should've known better. You don't seem to repeat ideas. I was thinking this was kids playing with their toys. Well, maybe it was. Grownup kids with some very dangerous toys ... and honey ... lots of honey.
What a great story! So imaginative!
Just the perfect sort of fun for a Sunday evening!
What a delightful story! And that's an amazeballs picture you took!
Pooh 👌
Continues to save the day and, enjoy the honey 🍯
I really liked this. I love your writing, always something different, never the same thing over again. Brilliant 🥂🥂🥂
Just magical! Who would have thought!!
Another one of your winners.