A short story
“Every story has to end. Readers rarely remember how a novel begins, but they always remember the endings. So the ending had better be good.” I predicted the ending here a quarter of the way through. You sure did fool me. Excellent.
Clever plot and an excellent ending: don't stop now.
Rob in Yauteoec
Brilliant 👏🏻. Loved every bit of this story 🔥
We come for the story we live for their twist. Lucky us AI sucks at both. :)
I’ve got a new idea for an AI start-up. I just need to write a script to fix the fucking strangely distorted alien-like hands that image generators like Midjourney crank out like there’s no tomorrow.
Hm. Maybe that’s the point. There is no tomorrow. 😳
I looked up “Etterretningstjenesten” because it’s so spectacular a word, I figured it had to be made up. It’s real. It’s a thing.
This was an amazing story, Bill! I’d love to read more stories about Lucas.
Well that was a cool little twist, wasn't it? Well done, Bill...as usual!
Let's see the writer write his way out of this
working for the Norwegian boss.
He gets to decide how to protect the minister
if not, then it's his loss.
Such a good read. Yes please for more Lucas. Great twists.
Writing is a dirty job. 🤣 Does this mean Lucas has to start writing in Norwegian?
I agree about endings. Not much worse than a story with an unsatisfying ending.
Such an enjoyable read! And I'd love a glimpse of your questionnaire if you will share.
Very good story and I think it could also be quite plausible as well.
One of the risks of being a professional writer is that someone will be offended by what you write and want to have you killed...
Classic thriller double ending! I like that we come into the story at just the right time to witness it.
My ad produced much less satisfactory results. This is a fantastic read! Keep it going!